2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Firstly, everyone should have a strong will. Because it's an important ensure for success that have a strong will. What's more, only strong will people can achieve a strong mission. Furthermore, the people has a strong will is very important. Secondly, nothing succeeds without a strong will, for example, someone gets a big achievement when they have a strong will. As far as I'm concerned, in the other words, students should do this, too. Besides, only they study hard, they will became a useful people, and contribute to social. Finally, whatever you are a student and adult, you must be insisted on your own strong will, because only you do this, can you have a big success.