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2. 处理垃圾的措施有：①垃圾分类；②报纸、玻璃的再利用；③有害垃圾的处理；④废水处理；⑤制定法律。
语句间的衔接不是很自然；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者词汇表达不够丰富，另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
So much rubbish in our city ,which will lead enviromentally polluation and do harm to our health.We can do some measures such as classifing the rubbish and make second use of newspapers,bottles.In other way to deal it,we can also deal with the harmful rubbish and polluated water.It's important to set up some laws.
