2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

学术词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇量稍小；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

from this survey conducted by Bureau of LaborStatistics ,Current Population survey ,we can see that with further education ,people can earn more money .And the unemployment rate in 2011 shows that the professional degree unemployment rate was the least unemployment rate .so we can conclude that a good education can contribute to your employment.However, we should be aware of the fact that it was not completely right .So ,we should have a good knowledge of it .