2006年12月英语六级作文真题:西方的节日

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Nowadays,a lot of chinese people like to celebrate the western holidays,like Christmas Day and Venessday.The reasons listed as follows. firstly,as the corporation between the countries become more and more uaually,the cultures from other country also come into our mind.secondly,the increase of demonic income promate the consumption,the mall all like to have discount on each holidays,obselutely contain western holidays. so people will go shopping for discount cloth and eating a meal with their friends. every coin has two sides, celebrate western holidays can hepl promoting our economic growth,we should also remember our traditional holidays as well