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In the recent decades,information techology has developed rapidly.The e-books have found their ways into our everyday life and have gained popularity among people. Some people hold the opinion that the e-books will take the place of the traditional books sooner and later,because e-books have various advantages over the tradition one.Firstly,reading novels become more and more easy thought the Internet direclty,we can download the files we need.What's more,the e-books can be stored more easily,most of which are free of change,while traditional books in bookstore are much more expensive. Last but not least,e-books can be stored more easily from computer and are more convenient for people to keep. As far as I am concerned,traditional books will still be the leading means od reading in a few years.However,the further development of information technology and with the popularity of the computer and Internet,e-books will surely take the palce of traditional books in the near future.