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字数：200满分：100分
这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；文中词汇使用灵活，学术词汇使用较丰富。
Positively and optimistically, the man in the right side of the cartoon considers the rest water in the bottom as a god-blessed present, yet in the left side the other who could merely condemn the nearly empty bottle as a totally broken hope. It is absolutely two completely diverse responds to the same event, which reflecting two opposite attitudes our mankind holds. Optimism, beyond all question, plays a critical role in the process of pursuing eminence. First and foremost, without steadily and consciously enthusiasm and motivation brought by an bright belief, we can hardly put our thoughts into action or overcome setbacks. I can think of no better exemplification than Coco Chanel, the founder of Chanel, who set up Channel from a millinery shop and keep her chasing pavement of stepping above the infiniteness of creation due to her never yielding to life or fate. In addition, it is an affirmative outlook, instead of pessimism or desperation, that inspires those in adverse circumstances, that grants passages for those in confusion, and that relieves those under great pressure. It goes with no denying that God smiles to those who smile. After all, a famous saying goes " If winter comes, can spring be far behind.", which is a expression of optimism. To sum up, optimism enables people to behave confidently, sensibly,and wisely, in terms of character and competence, bettering personality and leading a shining-splendid future both in career and daily life.
