2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

How many people will succee in the same class?And why dose so difference in the same class?The same teachers and same education ways that some students fail to go university,but others gain good achievement.Why are they fortune so distinct?The answer is, some of them would be succeed because of they never give up,they have strong will.It's successful important guarantee. And then,the finish of great mission that person of the strong will could to do it.No matter ancient or today,in spite of international or home,all can't do it without the strong will. The same with us,as a student that eventually become a talent if no study hard.