2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

Nothing succeeds without a strong will "Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world,I've done ithundreds of times."As for a lot of person,qutting smoking is a very difficult thing. Why? Because they don't have strong spirit. There is a saying goes,"Nothing is impossible."If you working hard, you can do what you want to do. No matter you work or study, you can get succeed if you concerning on something. For example, Someone want to lose weight, it need too many soul of insist.It need to doing exercises every day and eating less food. It is important to do that insist in doing every day. When it comes to a topic about strong will, we can conclustion that without insist, without succeed. Anyway, how can we make a strong will?We can djo that ask for yourself you can do ti one mores time every times. Finally, you can do everything with a strong will in silence.