2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章层次较为清晰。

With the development of technology, online shopping has become a kind of fashion. There are many advantages of online shopping. For example, when we choose online shopping, we can save a lot of time to do what really interested us. Besides, it's also pretty convenient to most of us. However, a coin has two sides. One thing we cannot ignore is that online shopping also has its disadvantages. And it is common that what we are willing to buy is not equal as what we finally got. In addition the slow speed delivery sometimes delay our daily life. In general, it is a trend that online shopping has become necessary to many of us. So, be cautious and enjoy a modern life.