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My favorite sport My favorite sport is play football.I love it by one chance.One day,I pick a football on the road after school,and then I play it with my friends.form that,I loved it deeply. I often play football with my classmates,and take part in some activity in the school.I prefer the football start is backham.To become aprofessional football player is my dream.In order to the dream I always practice on my free.Although it must be late because I didn't play it from little.But I believe "Better later than never". I believe I will success if I try my best.