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saving money in a proper way shopping,of course,plays an important role in every one's life.we need to buy food,clothes and other things we need in our daily life.many of us may choose to buy thing when they are in a sale.is it a correct for shopping?as far as i am concerned,shopping when goods are in a sale can save money for us ,but we should not only pay attention to the price.there are many thing we are supposed to do to save money and become a smart consumer. the quality of the goods is the most important thing.on the one hand,if we buy something low quality and we can only use it for once or even we can not use it ,is not it a kind of waste?on the other hand,something in a sale may be bad low quality,though we buy it in a low price,it's quality can not match to its price too.so,pay attention to the quality firstly. then price is also a necessary thing we should care to save money.when it comes to price,there are money things we can do.firstly,we can compare the price of the same good in the different stores.secondly,if we are not so urgent for it, we can wait for a period time to see whether it will be in a sale or not.thirdly,bargaining is also a good way.some business men may give a high price,you can beat a bargain with them. all in all,to save money and be a smart consumer ,we should pay attention to both quality and price maybe other things too.therefore,saving money need a proper way instead of just the low price.