2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

丰富的使用了长难句；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；文中词汇表达贫乏，请仔细检查词汇的拼写；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Ruduce waste on campus is very important,waste is of increasing severity on some campus,so we should consider about how to change the phenomenon.On the hand,students wast water and eletric,on the other hand,students wast paper,grain and other goods of life. Wast water and eletric will have the pollution of environment,becuase water and eletric