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t's not uncommon that many people are spending more and more leisure time watching television since it is a effective way to kill time and enjoy hapiness. But whether televisions has destroied communication among friends and family, I think, is till open to discuss. Admittedly, the proliferatin of televisions has occupied much time of communication among family and friends. In fact, all of us has ever experineced or are experiencing this story. When we arrive at home from school, the first thing is to open the television and enjoy the wonderfl TV play. the television programs, such as soap opera, cartoon and sports, are so appealing that we cannot help addicting to them.Sometimes, we even forget the time and existence of family members. Clearly, it is the television that impedes the communication among family and friends. However, overstating the adverse effect on communication brought about is unfair. Actually, television has substantially improved the communication among friends and family, even strengthens the family bond. To begin with, watching television provides an excellent platform for family members or friends to enjoy a nice time and communication together. Imaging that family members sit on the sofa together watching TV-The Big Bang, what a sweet scene! It's inevitable that people will have some discussion about the TV plays. Also, watching popular TV series offer a common concerned matter to discuss and is an opportunity to communicate. I still remember the time when "Prison Break" was popular in China, My friends, my parents, even my grandparents are attracted by this TV series. Then the fate of Michael has been drawing greatest attention from us and we discuss this topic never feeling boring. For these, how can you assume that televison has negative effect on communication among family and friends? Therefore, it is people themselves rather than television that palys a major role in communication among family and friends. As long as we reasonable use of television, we will have a better future!
