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2013全国中考英语试题汇编试题(38)写作:Teenagers need healthy eating

发布时间:2013-11-08 16:38浏览次数:1168
要求:
青少年饮食是影响民族人口素质的重要因素,但是目前部分青少年的饮食状况令人担忧。请你根据下面提供的要点,写一篇题为"Teenagers need healthy eating"的英文演讲稿,准备参加学生会组织的英语演讲活动。
要点:
1. Eat snacks or other unhealthy food
2. Take in(摄入) either too little or too much nutrition(营养) every day
3. Go to school without breakfast
注意:
 1. 对所给要点,可做适当发挥。
 2. 词数 80 左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。

 3. 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。 


Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is "Teenagers need healthy eating".
Healthy eating is very important to us teenagers. However,


That's all. Thank you for listening! 
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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,学术词汇使用稍显不足;文中从句使用量偏少;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is"Teenagers need healthy eating". Healthy eating is very important to us teenagers. However, we can see many unhealthy food in our earth.Such as KFC and some junk food, It is much less health than our friuts or vegetables. So we must eat less of them, Sometimes, we can see many teenagers Eat snacks or other unhealthy food. What can we eat? It's also must be a question, but one thing important. We must Go to school without breakfast. That's all. Thank you for listening!

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