2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

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Great a Green Campus Now,with the development of the socity.More and more people were took attention to have a green life. It's essentional to the student in school.So to have a green life.We should do our best to great a green campus. The green campis is not only the green environment,but also the good habbits that are benifit ourselves.There are many ways that are helpful for greating a green campus.The first is improve the quality of our food.Having a healthy body is the basical.The second,keeping the air crash.So that can improve the normal life.There is no doubt that the school can provide the enviroment like this.But there are an important thing to great a green campus except have a green enviroment.The school should also stick to encourage everyone to protect our beautuful world.This is the most important. To great a green campus,we as well as do our best to not wasting food,water.and so on.Protecting the plant from destroing.It's my thoughts,at least we should do something.