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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。

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On Maintaining Trust As we all know,no one can live alone ,all of us need relatives,friends,even the strangers.Without friends,our life will be boring.Because friends are those people who we can share our enjoyment and sorrow with.And relatives are also part of our life.Relatives are the one that we can turn to when we get into trouble. We know the importance of relationships,but how to keep a good one?From my part,i insist that maintaining trust between each other is the key part of a relationship. Here are many ways to maintaining trust.First,trusting is a feel of human ,we should believe that all the people have their goodness.Second,we could keep in mind that trusting is good for not only us but also the one we love.Third,we should be clearly about who can be trusted.After all,trusting is not equal to believe everyone. In short,maintaining trust is essential in our life.No trusting will lead to mistakes which could be avoided actually.So if we want to get along well with our friends or relatives,we must be trust them.

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