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要求：
1. 条理清楚，有表明自己观点的句子。
2. 书写工整，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。4. 参考词汇：China dream，come true ,achieve one's dreams., give up， hold on to, make up of
作者词汇量偏少，不过单词拼写方面做的不错；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
My Dream Every one have a dream, the dream can be a family dream or a another dream.I am Li Hong, I am a middle school student. I have a big dream, It's my China dream. My dream is about our life in fature. In the fature, we may be many jobs, such as doctor, engineer and so on, I am not sure about that, but I want do some thing useful. That's my dram. If I can come ture, I'll so happy. In fact, become this dream, I'll never give up on study. Li Hong's dream is small, but China dream is big.
