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Hello everyone. Today our disscuss topic is: Student Use of Computer. Now, every family at least have one computer. But computer can do what? lat me tell you. In 1990. People use computer for 2 hours, they often use them for study or math, then, In 1995. People use computer for 4 hours, they often use them for study or math,too.But,In 2002. People use computer for 14 hour and they often use them for amusement. Well think of it, what will the future be like? Computers are useful now, but most of them are expensive, some of them costour 1,000 yuan, but some of them costs 10,000 yuan. No metter? Well, I have to admit one thing that is our upturn living standards, But, can we costs all the money on the computer? Of course we can't. So please week up, honey. We must life don't play computer everyday. That's all! Thank for you listening.
