2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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Each parent loves their children,and they hope their children can grow up with any difficulties,and enjoy a happy life.So they help their children decide everything.Parents help children choose what to learn ignore children's interest.Some parents even help children wash clothes until they were 18 years old. Children will leave their parents anyway,and live with themselves.Some children can't do anything once they leave their parents.Such as washing or cooking.All this due to their parents didn't help their children independent. There is no doubt that enough concren must be paid to this problem.As far as my concren,all parents should help children to be independent.They should let their children wash their own clothes.Sometimes children should make their mind by themselves.Only in this way they can turely independent.