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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5519
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
要求
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;请注意分段。

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Nowadays,it's easy to discover that lots of parents have arranged almost everything for their children so that they will not need to worry about anything and be more concentrated on their study.As we all know,Chinese parents always long to help their children solve the problems their children meet for the reason that parents don't want their kids to suffer pains.Actually,it is pains that make us kids grow strongly. It's essential for children to become independent because it's impossible for parents to be with us forever.Not only should parents raise their kids' awareness of being independent,but also adults have to take actions.For example,children should be taught how to do housework and deal with the obstacles by their own.

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