2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

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As the table demonstrated that the Life Expectancy in 1990 was nearly 60 years, increased from 40 years in 1960, by a 50% increment during these 20 years. While the Infnt mortality declined sharply from 20% in 1960 to 10% in 1990. The Life expectancy means how long people generally expected themselves to live, and the Infant Mortality represents the total number of deaths among very 1000 births. The possible reasons for the above trend would be mainly two as below: Firstly, bettler medical and treatment conditions were provided to older people and pregananted women by the government or other social insurance organisations in line with the improvemet of the social healthy care system; Secondly, the world keeps in a relatively peaceful status intead of full of war or blood conflict during these twenty years, which made the deaths caused by wars decreased dramatically so that the average length of life rose. For the same reason the death of infant declined as well at the same time. So it is a good phonomenon that these two index improved for people to live a better life and it's so crutial for all of us to keep a peaceful world.