拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;使用了简单的从句;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用;请注意分段。
it is a popular trend to learn foreign language .people of worldwide recognized the issue.earth is an international village .people do business all around countries.you should understand the difference with other countries in culture,customs,society.for this ,foreign languages is so important,that's why so many people learned or learning other languages.but how to study we should to take?which ways we should take ?there are many people learned in their own countries.others going abroad.which is the best? i think