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托福独立写作模拟题:在母语国学习外语

发布时间:2013-05-16 14:24浏览次数:508
要求:
Directions: The independent essay usually asks for your opinion about a familiar topic. You will have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your response. Typically, a good essay for the independent topic will require that you write 300–350 words.
Question: Many people have learned a foreign language in their own country; others have learned a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken. Which is better? Give the advantages of each and support your viewpoint.
题干讲解
本题要求考生通过定位,概括和分类仔细审题,就某个问题写一篇感想,或就一个事件进行阐述,解释以及论证自己的观点,列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章。
观点提示
1、 在母语国学习外语可以更好的把握口语化的表达。
2、 在母语国家学习外语还可以通过系统的阅读渠道提高自己的外语能力。
用户的作文(系统评分56.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;使用了简单的从句;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

it is a popular trend to learn foreign language .people of worldwide recognized the issue.earth is an international village .people do business all around countries.you should understand the difference with other countries in culture,customs,society.for this ,foreign languages is so important,that's why so many people learned or learning other languages.but how to study we should to take?which ways we should take ?there are many people learned in their own countries.others going abroad.which is the best? i think

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