题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词。
nowadays,more and more people feel that indifference become the topic of society.Why the phenomenon occur?And how can we resolve these problems? it is the known to us all,trust is the most important identity while we make friends with others.meanwhile,trust is also play a important role in our life.for example, as a student when we take part in a activity that it requires corporation,we have to trust our partner. As long as we trust each other, we can create a innovative and perfect world.