2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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On Excessive Packaging Wite the development of our country,we our China has already been the third most strongest country in the world.However,every coin has two points.when we promote our economics urgently,we are getting into troubles.One of the phenomenons is excessive packaging.Maybe we can blame this result on our government,but to be honest ,how could we be so unconscious of our faults! Many people who sell goods have a common sense that they should pack things more attractive to appeal customers attention,which contribute to the result.As far as i am concerned,our government should take measures to make this trend decline.We ourself should also observe the regultions that our government makes,than we may have a more efficient shoping.