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In everyday life, everyone all encounters difficulities.Some of the difficulties may be dealed with by oneself,while some of them need ask someone to cope with. Of course,we should help the others when the others have difficulties.For instance, we may help the elder to walk across street.However,some request actually can not help.For example,a few students always ask their classmates to do homeworks in the school.Some people want to get a project through giving gifts to someone who is in charge of the project.Facing the kind of help, we need say no loudly. However,some peopel don't say no when facing these unreasonble help,why don't they rejuct them? Some factors lead to the phenomenon.First of all, we feel that will harm classmate relationship if we refuse the reference of homework.Secondly,some persons want to obtain profit through the kind of so-called help because of their authority.Last but not least, in their viewpoint, they wish they can also get the special care in the future if today they help those people. Obviously, the so-called help is harmful for personel and our society.on the one hand,that will affect fair competition ,on the other hand,that will decline our society autmosphere.We should resistain the bad "help"
