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With the popularity of internet in temporary generation,we take it as a necessaty we truly needed in our life.everything has two-fold bonus,we cannot deny the importance of internet,meanwhile we seem to neglect that interpersonal communication can't be replaced by internet anyway.We are fond of surfing online and we share interesting things that take place around us every single day,for example,some software like twitter and facebook provide a platform for us to show ourselves and make friends in this fiction world.Gradually, we get away from the truly life and then are dramatically addicted to fiction and illusion.The reason to explain the causes of this situation is that
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