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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4565
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
评语:

文章衔接手法恰当;从句使用稍显不足,注意个别句子错误;能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;请注意分段。

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With the popularity of internet in temporary generation,we take it as a necessaty we truly needed in our life.everything has two-fold bonus,we cannot deny the importance of internet,meanwhile we seem to neglect that interpersonal communication can't be replaced by internet anyway.We are fond of surfing online and we share interesting things that take place around us every single day,for example,some software like twitter and facebook provide a platform for us to show ourselves and make friends in this fiction world.Gradually, we get away from the truly life and then are dramatically addicted to fiction and illusion.The reason to explain the causes of this situation is that

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