题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分学术词汇;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
In China,the March is the month of learning Leifeng,who is a integrity man, and constantly did a good deed but not to expect a reward.He is our admirable hero.Does anyone hold the same attitude towards Leifeng?Definitely not,as to this issue,opinions vary from person to person.For those who hold the opinion that doing a good deed should get a reward claim that,firstly,it is not our obligation about doing a good deed;secondly,in the contemporary time,someone enthusiastically help others,but get a unexpected result.For instance,a good child helped a old woman who fell down to stand up,while the woman claimed that the child knocked her down.According to the mentioned above,someone adhere to consider that doing a good deed should be afforded a reward. However,others maintain that expecting a reward when doing good things don′t think so.They insist on doing like Leifeng.First and foremost,they emphasize that it will influence the harmony of our society and even result in severe consequences if we hope for reward before doing a good thing.Moreover,when we are doing a good deed,our body and mind become satisfied. Seen from the mentioned above,if I were forced to agree with one of the two opinions,I,doubtless,stand by the idea that doing a good deed should not expect a reward.On the one hand,it might be denied in many things if we have reward in mind first.For example,a person suddenly get a hurting-heart on the street,if you do not assist him,he may die.On the other hand,for a poor man,he could not afford reward to you when you help him.Accordingly,we should do a good deed without asking reward.