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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；请作者增加词汇丰富度，希望作者能够较为熟练的使用学术词汇；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
today，more and more people like to use dialects even though in public places.this cultural phenomenon has aroused many people‘s attention.and i think using the dialects in public places is very helpful to the cultural communication. first,using the dialects in public places has become a trend.people has the choice to accept and develop something they like.There is no doubt that the way of the cultural communication cannot be constrainted. Second,this phenomenon can make more people realize more enjoyable culture background and protect our colorful culture heritage.Last,using the dialects in public places can make a serious or boring speaking even more interesting.Don't you think so? That's why i think the dialects can be accepted
