题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒;用词灵活多样,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
The sketch is characterized by a old man,who are reading a book which is about how to identify counterfeit goods,also there is another book in his arm which is named "Be carefully cheated'.With the reform and opening-up policy,and china′s participation in globalization,the situation which our country and its citizenry face has become remarkably complex.Meanwhile the international and interpersonal relationships and transactions are confronted with more test.Therefore,gradually many cheating deed commence in the merchandise trading,which arousing people′s attention to the goods of true and false. Nowadays,with the market economy is globalizing is result in the international and interpersonal increasingly transaction,which make the competition more fiece.Someone,who expect to achieve greater benifits,might start to afford counterfeit goods to civilians in the world,These fate goods,including milk powder,electrical appliances,clothes and so on,which might exert amazingly influence on our living,and even harm to our life.Accordingly,it is a high appeal for both countries and individuals to maintain trust between each other and should resolutely resist on counterfeit goods in transaction. All the mentioned above,to avoid the counterfeit commodity are in flood in our market transaction and to maintain harmony and prosperity of our nation,we should keep trust,be honest and promises in transaction,and the companies and individuals should comply with regularities and laws.Only in this way can we obtain more profit and can build a better harmonious world.