2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Nowadays,a phenomenon on excessive packaging of many goods draw our attention.If you are shopping in your local supermarket, you will find that many goods are wrapped with elegrant and luxurious packaging.such as moon cake.It look as the simple food.but now the vaulue of moon cake will be increaded many times because of the packaging. Why does the phenomenon happen now? Some factors lead to that.First of all, Businessmen hope to obtain the max profit through decorating the goods packaging. Secondly, some consumers buy some cargoes with elegrant packaing to give gifts to the others. Last but not least, it is a competitive means because now the competition of goods in the market are severe. In my opinoin,it is necessary that goods with packaging sell in the market,but if the vaule of packaging surpass the vaule of goods.I feel that is resource waste.We should advocate healthy consumption