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Adolescence is a period of time which we should value most. As we stay in college most of the time, we students must contemplate how to accomplish college meaningfully. Should we study all day long? The answer is: no, because there are a wide variety of extracurricular activities waiting for us. And extracurricular activities are as significant as school work. Here are several reasons why people tend to place much emphasis on extracurricular activities. First, extracurricular activities enrich our college life. It is rather dull to spend hours of our leisure time only reading, learning, and reviewing; however, if you participate some interest clubs, things will change completely. You may find that college life turns out to be quite fantastic. Next, extracurricular activities help to broaden the mind. Knowledge acquired from textbook is far too little for us, so we need to improve the level of ourselves by some other means like participating extracurricular activities. Through these activities, we experience a lot and gain a lot, thus we would be no longer narrow-minded. Finally, during the process of holding these activities, we can develop our capability of planning, organizing, and leading. Although a great mass of people have realized the importance of extracurricular activities, there are still some drawbacks should be improved. To make extracurricular activities better, I can’t resist concluding this article with some kernels of advice: diversify the kinds of extracurricular activities; offer more options to students; give guidance to students if it is necessary.
