2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；能够使用一些不错的从句；作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇，以及部分学术词汇，单词拼写也要仔细。

Parents help children do anything has been playing an increasingly important role in our dayily life,it has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. A lot of people,especially the young people who are lack of self-control,are easily addicated to the game,which will result in their don't go class or rest.However, parents can help us to spend time reasonablely.But other people set forth competely totly different argument concerning this case.They claim that the children will lact of communication with their classmate,if the parents help children much. As far as I am concerned,I am in claim to be on the side of the latter view.I think the parents can help us at moment,but they can't help us forever,so we must become indepence.