2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

Parents help children do anything has been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life,it has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. A lot of people,especially the young people who are lack of self-control,are easily addicted to the game,which will result in their don't go class or rest.However, parents can help us to spend time reasonably.But other people set forth completely totally different argument concerning this case.They claim that the children will lact of communication with their classmate,if the parents help children much. As far as I am concerned,I am in claim to be on the side of the latter view.I think the parents can support us at moment,but they can't help us forever,so we must become indepent.