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How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent In our life past, one family have three or more then three kids. But now, there are only one child in every family. So there is a situation like that when kid'll do some thing by themselves, some parents'll say that"hey baby, wite, I will do that" well parents all love their child, but how to make our children self-help, we maybe think a lot. In fact, our parents don't do that can make children do more thing by himself and can make our children become more and more self-help. So, parents. Don't do more things than your kids! It is halp them.