新课标八年级下学期期末测试冲刺复习专题书面表达（2）：给大卫的一封信

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；词汇表达较灵活准确，学术词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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