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in recent years,there is a phenomenon that students are becoming ignorant of chinese study.more and more students look down on chinese study and think that it is not very important compared with other subjects. there are some reasons that can account for this phenomenon. first of all, the circulumns of school are too many for students to learn and they do not have much time to pay attention to chinese study.secondly,for many students ,it seems to be not very valuable to focus on chinese study because it can not bring a lot of benefits compared with english. finally,the society is not very engaged in chinese study,which is a big harmful surrounding for chinese study.many consequences has been brought into on account of the ignorant of chinese.students' ability of expression is becoming worse and worse.so does their ability of writing. as far as I am concernd, chinese study is necessary for students both now and in the future.chinese is our mother lauguage.as a chinese person, it is obiliged to study chinese well,which is the lowest request for chinese students. at the same time, society should take their responsibility to advocate the chinese study.I hold the hope that with both efforts of students and society,to learn chinese well can be a trend in the near future.
