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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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Good habits result from resisting temptation As we know,good habits are very significant for a person.however,with the development of economy,it gradually appears various of temptation in our daily life. They are have seriously impact on forming good habits.Therefore,we should resist temptation and keep good habits. There is a typical example to explaining the point.For instance, many of students addicts to playing computer games now. Once they crazy about computer games, they will give up anything.To put it simply, only games in their world. They does not care about their study,and no matter how hard we try to persuaded them,they will not listen.So,they are not able to cultivate good habits.because they can not resist temptation. It is obvious that good habits result from resist temptations.Meanwhile,it is not well-off to resist the temptation of the outside world.We should have a strong will to beat them, and then forming good habits,to create a better future.

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