Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Good habits result from resisting temptation As we know,good habits are very significant for a person.however,with the development of economy,it gradually appears various of temptation in our daily life. They are have seriously impact on forming good habits.Therefore,we should resist temptation and keep good habits. There is a typical example to explaining the point.For instance, many of students addicts to playing computer games now. Once they crazy about computer games, they will give up anything.To put it simply, only games in their world. They does not care about their study,and no matter how hard we try to persuaded them,they will not listen.So,they are not able to cultivate good habits.because they can not resist temptation.