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The cartoon informs us of the significance of maintaining individuality. In our daily life, to avoid being isolated, skepticism and opposition, we more ofthen than not endeavor to cater to others’ taste，be in sympathy with others’ opinion or go with the stream. By doing this, we can protect ourselves, but also probably lose ourselves and the chances of success. However, maintaining individuality sometimes means not only being different and distinctive, but also being more likely to surpass commonness, draw others’ attention and win opportunities. Just imagine why Apple’s products could be widely and deeply supported by consumers among other similar products, it is not their appearance and price, but their distinctive function，that couts. We show respect to custom, truth and those widely shared ideas，but this is not the justification for eliminating individuality. However, we should also bear in mind that, when showing ourselves through individuality, we should not hurt others’ feelings and interest.
