2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Recently the problem of free admission to museums has been brought into focus.More and more museum has been opening for free.The aims of free admission to museum to assist more people have an opportunity know more about our ancient achievement. People's views on this question vary from peason to peason.Some people hold that museum opening for free means some poor people like bergars have access to hosity.It can help more people enpend their knowledge.But another think this deceion will has bad influence to museum.Some people without commons maybe destory something even careless. As far as my concern,free admission to museum ia goods way to helps more people learning.About its deficiency,we can take some useful measures.For exemple,people can make a sign in the museum to tell people what they shouldn't do.Only in this way can we make a most use on this action.