语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;可增加从句和复杂句的使用;作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累。
Recently,numerous students ignored the study of Chinese,it has drawn attention from the public and fierce debates are right on their way. Then what underlies the strange phenomenon?There are several reasons for this:first and foremost,as we all know,Chinese is our mother tongue,a number of students take it granted that Chinese is extremely simple to grasp; besides,some of them think that it is boring and old-fashioned to study Chinese.Neglecting the study of Chinese,nevertheless,contributes to some undesirable consequences,for instance,students will overlook the Chinese culture finally. In order to enhance the situation,from my perspective,it is high time that we should take several particularly effective measures,first of all,we should educate and advocate our classmates to recognize the importance of learning Chinese,second,we should a lot of interesting activities about the study of Chinese,the last but not least,we should adversity the significance of learning Chinese by television or other means.