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考研作文:关于领导

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:22浏览次数:2753
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题目要求:

什么是领导?领导应具备什么品质?

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300字左右。

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

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as the saying goes,"lions led by a goat will be beat by sheep led by a lion."the profound saying reflects that a leader is significant in teamwork.given leadership matters a lot,we want to know what a lead is. at the standpoint of mine,a leader must be the one who has the power to make all his staff do whatever he wants.whereas a leader is not neccessary to be in office,that is,an actual leader is a spiritual one instead of just a position.how come a leader is not appointed by his boss?the question refers to the classification of power.we think there are three orgins of power:one is chrismas,one is legal and the last is regulatory.although the regulatory power is decisive,it can be overthrown by the other two.however,if a man of charastically charming,he can get into power legally.so it is the leader himself that really influenced the power. a leader is not to do everything.all he needs to do is to deal with controvesy among staff and make urgent decision when neccessary.in this case,i think a leader must be intellectual and brilliant.elegance is required to show his manners,forgiveness to show his broad eyes and sence of responsibility to show his confidence.

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