2010年6月英语四级作文真题:学生不重视拼写

学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

On a birthday party,everyone except the grandparents were buried themselves in electronic products and then completely neglected the elders,which made their grandparents pretty angry.It indicates that electronic products have seriously influenced our life,especially interpersonal relationships. Nowadays,nearly everyone owns at least one electronic product.It's easy to discover that we can never leave them because some of us use them even having dinner.There is no denying that they bring us human being a lot of convenience.Not only can we communicate with our acquaintance easily,but also they can broaden our friend circle. however,every coin has two sides.It's the electronic products that have taken up most of our time.What's more,they seriously affect our eyesight and decrease our exercising time,which definitely weakens our health.