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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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there is a survey about education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment. we can see that when people get a Professional degree when they are 24,they would get the most weekly earnings.But when they get higher degree ,they can't earn more. eventhrough,There is a sence that when you get more higher degree you will earn more. there is a average degree is that Bachelor's degree .and there is a average earnings. when you lower than Bacherlor'degree,you will earn little. From this we can findout that 7.6% is an unemployment average rate. so it is request you must at less get a Associate degree,but the Associate degree earn less then the average weekly earning. so,the best way is that you get a Bachelor'degree at least.

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