2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Man and Computer It is widely acknowledged that computer plays an significant part for both individuals and organizations. Nowadays, a lot of work is done with the help of computer. Many people's life become boring without the computer. Computer is an important partner in their life. However, a danger is hindered in this phenomenon which computer plays the most important role in the life. It effects the way of man mind work. Sometimes, a problem appears in our life or work, the first thing we do is searching the solving methods with the computer. At the same time, we always believe it is useful and correct. As far as I am concerned, computer is a tool that helps us to finish our work and to make out life to be convenient. It serves us, so we need to control it do something according our thoughts, but not we do something follow the computer.