2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；作者能词汇表达较准确熟练，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

Online shopping has been play an increasingly improtant role in our daily life,it has brought a lot of benefits has created some serious problems as well. A lot of people especially the young people who are lack of self-control,are easily addicated to online shopping,which will result in their wasting time and buying undreable things.However,there are large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.They claim online shopping is convience,we could burgent to the shop of internet.This ways can saving some money. As far as i am concerned,i am inclimed to be on the side of the latter view.Because of I always shopping in internet.we can shopping at home,and buy some cheaping things.