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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

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文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Man and Computer It is widely acknowledged that computer plays a significant part for both individuals and organizations. Nowadays, a lot of work is done with the help of computer. Many people think their life will be very boring if there is no computer. Computer is an important partner in their life. However, a danger is hindered in this phenomenon which computer plays the most important role in the life. It affects the way of man mind work. Sometimes, a problem appears in our life or work, the first thing we do is searching the solving methods with the computer. At the same time, we always believe it is useful and correct. As far as I am concerned, the computer is a tool that aids us to finish our work and to make out life to be convenient. It serves us, so we need to control it do something according our thoughts, but not we do something follow the computer.

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