2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

Online shopping has been play an increasingly important role in our daily life,it has brought a lot of benefits has created some serious problems as well. A lot of people especially the young people who are lack of self-control,are easily addicted to online shopping,which will result in their wasting time and buying endurable things.However,there are large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.They claim online shopping is convience,and we could bargain to the shopkeeper.This ways can save some money. As far as I am concerned,I am inclined to be on the side of the latter view.Because of I always shopping in internet.We can shop at home,and buy some cheap things.