2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

Online shopping has been play an increasingly important role in our daily life,it has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. A lot of people especially the young people who are lack of self-control,are easily addicted to online shopping,which will result in their wasting time and buying useless things.However,there are large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.They claim online shopping is convience,and we could bargain to the shopkeeper.This ways can save some money. As far as I am concerned,I am inclined to be on the side of the latter view.We can shop at home,and purchase some cheap things.