题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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Over the last century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations.This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changeing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis.Especially the computers ,Over the last chentury the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations.This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changeing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis.